hye all.....................this is my asignment that we supposed to publish in our blog. Like what i say, im not really good in GRAMMAR....and i know i have the grammartical ERROR in my essay....
so, i hope all of you can help me to fixed it up and please leave me comment about my essay...and lastly....bye......:)

This is my first essay....
Mobile phone have made a big difference in our daily lives.
Nowadays, the improvement that has brought by mobile phone are now made a big difference in our daily lives and people more demanding on how it works and how it can be use. When mobile phone has been introduced, it brings a lot improvement to people. Example like people can communicate live with other people using the 3G service. Since that, people more like to use mobile phone because not only it made the improvement, but it also works more systematic and useful to everybody. In fact, we also can surf internet using the mobile phone and do lot of business dealing and also the transactions payment. Hence, there is nothing to argue that mobile phone have brought a big difference in our lives with all improvement system and software.






































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